關於慰問信的英語滿分作文
據報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)後處於極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的`治療款。
假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：
自我介紹
得知的情況
表示鼓勵
打算為她做什麼
祝她早日康復
注意：
1. 信的格式已為你寫好
2. 信中不得出現你的真實情況。
3. 詞數100左右。
4. 請在答題卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。
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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈
好句1、I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.
我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。
好處：which引導限制性定語從句。
2、So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，堅強地與疾病做鬥爭吧!
好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。