2015年6月四級作文範文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words。
2015年6月四級作文範文一
提示：這篇文章的主題可以寫成“技術是否能代替學校”。 思路：第一段描圖;第二段正反議論型(現象解釋型);第三段個人觀點。
Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cellphone in his hand is asking his mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school?
Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the public wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our development. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when children have questions, “baidu” instead of “teacher” will be the first to come to their minds。
To my knowledge, school learning should go hand in hand with technology. While cellphones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”， “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personality and allow us to adapt to the real world。
2015年6月四級作文範文二
破題思路：
第一段：漫畫描述，重點是母女之間的對話內容，從而引出文章的主題是有關孩子的獨立性，家長[微博]干涉孩子過多。
第二段：可以分析此現象產生的原因。
第三段：採取措施解決此現象。
How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Let’s take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mother’s choice with pride. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture。
What are the reasons for it? In the following sentences, I’ll venture to explore the reasons. To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their children to do everything. In addition, parents don’t believe that their children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any decisions. There are some suggestions given to our parents。
For one thing, it is quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really want. I contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some matters to help them to be independent。
2015年6月四級作文範文三
命題解析
本題要求首先簡要描述圖畫，然後評論這種現代生活。圖畫顯示：現代人無論工作、居家、娛樂還是睡眠，都與電腦密不可分。顯而易見，本題主旨為電腦或網路對現代生活的影響。
國內寫作考試中已經反覆考察電腦或網路這一熱點話題。2002年6月四級寫作考察“大學生使用電腦情況”，2009年考研[微博]寫作考察“網路的‘近’與‘遠’”，2012年6月六級寫作考察“網路對人際共同的影響”，2013年12月四級寫作考察“網路對人們溝通方式的影響”。2015年6月，四級寫作再次考察電腦或網路這一話題。如果考生研究過之前的.寫作真題，諸多表達均可使用。
寫作思路：
1、本題首段應簡要描述圖畫，指出人們無論工作、家庭、休閒或休息，都與電腦關係密切。
2、次段最好進行正反論證，說明電腦有利有弊：一方面可以滿足工作生活的需要並娛樂自我，另一方面過度沉迷也會浪費大量的時間和精力。
3、第三段最好提出建議措施：我們應該揚長避短，在合理使用電腦的同時，避免過度沉迷。
參考範文：
As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams。
The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life。
Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach。